They gradually away from 这句没有谓语
that is your mistake 换成that's更好
companying with your family 这里company的用世誉法错误,具体用法自己百度
I'm strongly convinced that companying with your family, your... 这里companying with your family是主语,本来要构成一个句子,可是你没有搜哪段谓语和宾语
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