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My dear classmates,
As( it ) is (known--know) to all, safety (are--is) very important in our daily life. Recently
our school has carried out a program aims at making our campus a safe
place to stay on. I think it is indeed a good practice, which will make us
known safety should always come first in our daily life, whether
we stay at school and outside it. When doing sports, we should care many
about the safety and avoid hurt. Besides, when we get into (the去掉) trouble with
our classmates, we should keep calmly and avoid any form of fighting.
Fighting may only bring (suffering--suffering) and pain to you. I think we should work
together to make our school safe.
Thanks!