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Dear Sir,
I'm writing to be one of the host (family改成families) for Chinese students.
(Building改成Built) in a beautiful neighborhood our large house (meet改成meets) their needs. Our car can take them to some places of (interesting改成interest). With good English, I'll have no (difficult改成difficulty) (communicate改成communicating) with them, Above all, we (host改成hosted) two Chinese students last year, through (that改成which) we've gained much experience. In addition (去掉to), they'll enjoy Chinese food as my mother has (wonderfully改成wonderful) cooking skills. I would greatly appreciate (加入it) if I could have the chance to host them.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

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Dear sir:
I'm writing to be one of the host family for Chinese students.
第一个To build in a beautiful neighborhood, our large house 第二个meets their needs. Our car can take them to some places of第三个 interest. With good English, I'll have no 第四个difficulty第五个 communiting with them, Above all, we 第六个hosted two Chinese students last year 第七个so we've gained much experience. In addition, they'll enjoy chinese food as my mother has 第八个wonderful cooking skills. I would greatly appreciate if i could have the chance to host them.
Looking forward to your reply.
第九个Yours
第十个Li Hua
供参考，祝进步！