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1 What is your likely in choosing songs for your audience

for改为in

2 The seminar starts on Friday and the experts will be discussing the impact of technology on the climate in the future.

discussing改为discuss

3 Barclays appointed Bob Diamond,the head of its investment-banking business,as it new chief executive from March 2011

from改为in

4 Those studying abroad will most timing return home for better employment because of the tight job market abroad

timing改为time

5 You can omit the last two sentences in the report

第一个the去掉

6 The noisy traffic is annoyance to the citize

is改为are

7 To our great blessing,she did not come as expected that day

To改为For

8 Without friends,he felt lonely in the city he had just arrived in

in改为on

9 She forgot to deposit the letter into the envelope

forgot改为forget

10 The picnic was interrupted by a hard shower yesterday

was改为is

相关资料拓展：

现在分词（Present Participle，又称-ing形式、现在进行式) ，是分词的一种，分词又分为现在分词和过去分词，它们都是非限定动词，即在句子里面不能单独充当谓语，但能充当其它判派的一些成分（定棚闭语，表语，补语和状语）。

并且它们具有动词的性质，所以又是类动词的一种。一般式：doing； 一般被动式：being done； 完成式：havingdone； 完成被动式：having been done。 所有否链冲裂定式都是在－ing前面加not ，包括独立主格形式。

1 不陆陪液乱者通 改为： what is your preference in choosing songs for your audience?

3 .....investment-banking business, as ITS new CEO on/since(?) march 2011.
4 不通早物 改为：those who studies abroad will most likely return home for better employment because of the tight job market abroad.
6 the noisy traffic is annoying to the citizens
其他的倒还算通顺

1. What is your preference for choosing songs for your audience

2. The seminar started on Friday.
   The seminar will start on Friday
   

3. 表示过去时的尘首时间状语, a week ago。
   因此本句可改为？
   What is your likelilhood in choosing songs for your audience:yesterday。改后句子为, in the evening：The seminar started on Friday, the other day？
   
   2 The seminar starts on Friday a 还还没写完吧：
   
   What is the likely in choosing songs for your audience ？
   What is your probability in choosing songs for your audience ？
   What is the probability in choosing songs for your audience ？
   What is the likelilhood in choosing songs for your audience, on Friday？ 时态也不对, just now1 What is your likely in choosing songs for your audience 中is 后your 换成the 或将your likely 改为 the likelihood\。
   表示过去固定时间状语只能与一般过去时连用；句子最后加问号.
   祝进步扒兄咐,而不春纯能与现在完成时连用, last week;probability 或 your likelihood\probability 都可以