Dear Sir / Madam,
I have been promoted as a silver member under your company via the paypal service on 1st Jan 2014, in the morning. It was shown that the deduction made was successful, but I failed to see the update of my status on my account. Please do help me check and hope to hear from you soon.
Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you in advance.
我有修改一下,让他变得比较顺畅,所以不是直接翻译。但是意思还是一样的!
欢迎追问 / 要求修改翻译~