whenever the rain come,the fish will always try (his best) to float on the water,but he can never touch (a single drop of) the rain,because they are seperated by a thin veil of water forever.
这绝对是高分句,用whenever引导的状语从句,用了丰富的词组(try one's best,a single drop of,a veil of),用词准确,touch一词增强了感情色彩。总之,佳句。绝对原创,望贴主采纳
The fish is always in the rainy day floating on the surface of the water, but never close to the rain, they never have so thin a thin, cut off the water.
Fish always floating on the surface of the water,but never can it be close to rain ,there is a piece of water surface staying there forever ,blocking them away.
Fish is always floating under the surface water,but never getting close to the rain.They will be seperated from the rain forever by a thin layer of water.
The fish always floats in the wet weather in the water surface, actually could not approach the rain, they forever had a that light water surface impediment
或者
The fish always floats in the surface in the rainy day, but always can not approach rain, they have so thin thin 1 F surface to block forever
呵呵,两个都可以~~~
During rainy days,fish tends to swim near the water surface but never aproaches the rain.The thin film at the surface of the water creats a buffer between them.