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Ming Dynasty, which had ruled China for 276 years, is pictured as one of the greatest time with orderable management and stable society in human history . During this time, the development of making area improved the market economy and citilization. A large mount of production, including wine and silk, was sold in the markets. Meanwhile, many foreign products, such as clocks and smoke, were input by China. Large business centers, such as Beijing, Nanjing, Yangzhou, Suzhou, appeared one by one. And it was also in Ming Dynasty that the boat group which was led by Zheng He, had ever come to Indian Ocean for large scales of exploring trips for seven times. What to be worth saying is, three of four classical books of Chinese literature were written in Ming Dynasty.