请问大家这句话这么翻译合适吗 翻译到英语

competition在此处是复数，要加s。逗号后最好改成 and received, 去掉for，句子就对了。
I actively participated in various competition about art, and received the first prize in provincial race 3 times.

我积极参加了一些关于艺术方面的比赛，3次获得了省级奖项
I took an active part in some competitions about art, and won the provincial awards for 3 times.

I actively participated in various competition about art, receiving the first prize in provincial race for 3 times.
建议修饰如下:

I actively participated in various arts competitions and won three first prizes 三次冠军 (?)at provincial level.

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