写作思路:确立中心,围绕选材,确定重点,安排详略,选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想,选择真实可信,新鲜有趣的材料,以使文章中心思想鲜明深刻地表现出来。具体如下:
I'am much taller now. When I was a kid I was short and I had a large build. Now I have a medium build. My hair is much shorter now because I like short hair very much. I become stronger and stronger because I like doing more sports than the past.
我得更高了。当我还是个孩子的时候,我头发很短,我有一个大的改变。现在我有一个中等身材。我的头发短得多,因为我喜欢短头发。我变得越来越坚强,因为我喜欢做更多的运动而不是过去。
I'am much taller now. When I was a kid I was short and I had a large build. Now I have a medium build. My hair is much shorter now because I like short hair very much. I become stronger and stronger because I like doing more sports than the past.
我得更高了。当我还是个孩子的时候,我头发很短,我有一个大的改变。现在我有一个中等身材。我的头发短得多,因为我喜欢短头发。我变得越来越坚强,因为我喜欢做更多的运动而不是过去。