求能批改英语作文的网站

我们老师叫我们在www.pigai.org这个网站写差凳作文，不收费，只要注册就可轮哪以了，有批改还有评分，不错的网站。
It was fine last sunday. We went to the west hill by bus to plant trees.some students plant trees, while others carry water. we worked hard. we were very tired but we were happy very much. Because we all know our work is meaningful. Planting trees can stop sand from blow into city and make our city more beautiful.
希望对你有所帮虚桐旅助。

1.第三句some应大写，句首的词都应大写，一定要注意。还有，时态。。。既然是歼肆上周册迹，那肯定应用过去式。
2.第四句，be动词后不能直接加动词原形，要么在work后加上ing，要么were去掉，work改为其过去式worked。
3.接下来，"plant trees can stop....",有没有想过句子里你的主语是? 所以应该州改并在plant后加上ing，动词+ing变为名词，planting trees做主语，还有就是这句中的stop，stop sth from doing.....这是固定搭配，所以blow应改为blowing。
希望可以帮到你！！！

不知道能批改英语作文的网站.以下改写供拆指参考.
你写的是上个星期日旅和配的事情,要用过去时态.写完作文要认真检查棚碰.注意大小写常用词汇和句型的基本用法.
It was fine last Sunday. We went to the West Hill by bus to plant trees.Some students planted trees, other sudents carried water. We worked very hard. We felt very tired but we were very happy because we all knew that we did a good job and what we did is meanignful.Planting trees can stop sand from blowing into our city and making our it more beautiful.

It was fine last sunday. We went to the west hill by bus to plant trees.Some students planted trees, others carried water. We were working hard. We were very tired but very happy. Because we all know our work very good,planting trees can stop sand from blowing into city and making our city more beautiful.

好久不改了 不会啊

你下一个 易改 的软件吧。有点用处，修正作文的