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Bill Gates is one of the most famous people in the world. He is known not only for a successful businessman, but also for a great philanthropist.
Bill Gates was born on 28th October, 1955. He got to know computer as young as 13 years old. He was a good students, and entered the Harvard University in 1973. Yet he left ungraduated 3 years later, Harvard do had taught him a lot.
In 1975, Bill Gates, along with a friend of his, founded a company named Microsoft. Not soon after, he became a billionaire.
Instead of letting his children inherit his huge amount of money, Bill Gates donates them to the society, in order to help those who are in a more emergent need of support by any means. By 2008, he has donated 280(题目里面的580一定是打错了) billion dollars.
As far as I am concerning, Bill Gates is a great person. Not only his intelligence and hard-working,but also his kindness has contributed to his succerss. I positive that if people can treat others in a nicer way, but not just focus on trying to become successful simply through physically getting jobs done, the world will undoubtedly turn into a much better one.

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