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Dear Dong,
First of all, you should have confidence in yourself. As is known to all, confidence is the bacical need of communicating. Therefore, only when you are confident, can you truly communicate with your clssmates and make friends. Besides, try to care about them and always be glad to offer your help. Last but not the least, learn to be a friend of every faith towards them. Sincerely, I hope my sugestions could give you some help.
Yous,

Hello,Xiao Dong.At first I think you should be more confident about yourself,and then you can communicate with others genuinely .Learn to be honest and understanding.Help your classmates as possible as you can.
I firmly believe that your classmates are willing to make friends with you.

Hello Xiaodong, I think first you have to have confidence on their own, and then talk to the students sincere communication, to frank the students to be considerate, caring for students, help students. I believe the students will be your friend.

郑小四