Dear Tom,
Bati here. Long time no Mail.What's new? The spring is coming in England.How nice it is!I like it very much!
Last month, Yi ruo and Lifei , Jim have come to Cambridge University and we enjoy together.
I have 16 classes every week, which have made me extremely busy. In my spare time, I ask Zorige come to play football with my friends and enjoy ourself.My position is Forward like Angentina football star Batistuta,who is my favourit star.
These days , i'm busy with my Blog. Here is Address livecom.spaces.live.com/lee , once you 're free,U can leave your trace in our BBS and enjoy music ~
Please take care of yourself.
Keep in touch!
Best Regards!
Li Hua
Jan.23 2011
Dear tom
How are things going. Thanks for your letter. Now let me tell you something about my school. Our school is very big and clean. There are lots of beautiful flowers and trees. There is a big playground where we often have our PE class and play basketball. There is a big library, some labs, a gym and more than thirty classrooms. Our teachers and classmates are friendly and kind. Our school environment is very beautiful. I love my school very much. That's all. I am looking forward to hearing from you
li hua
For a long time no write mail to you. Are you doing?
I'm now a student at Cambridge University. We have classes for two weeks, 16 lessons a week, so I'm learning is also very busy.
I've met a few Chinese friends here, where a boy named Jeff, who also come from China. We often learn together.
At school, spare time I enjoy playing basketball, or reading in the library. I have adapted to living environment here, and I'm very happy.
Christmas soon, you have time for me to play? please reply telling me, looking forward to your arrival!
Keep in touch!
内容要点,1,每周上课的安排。2,对老师的印象。3,与同学的关系。4,业余活动。5,邀请tom一起过圣诞节
帮你是害你,别浪费时间了,还是多看些范例作文,记住一些句子间的连接词,总结词。以后那些作文就小意思了,还有字一定要写的好,注意时态语态。