不知道能批改英语作文的网站.以下改写供参考.
你写的是上个星期日的事情,要用过去时态.写完作文要认真检查.注意大小写常用词汇和句型的基本用法.
It
was
fine
last
Sunday.
We
went
to
the
West
Hill
by
bus
to
plant
trees.Some
students
planted
trees,
other
sudents
carried
water.
We
worked
very
hard.
We
felt
very
tired
but
we
were
very
happy
because
we
all
knew
that
we
did
a
good
job
and
what
we
did
is
meanignful.Planting
trees
can
stop
sand
from
blowing
into
our
city
and
making
our
it
more
beautiful.
ReWriter改写jiang（工匠的匠），直接上百度搜第一个词条就行，中文的不收费。
英语好的话，grammarly。
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