while I am dyingbe dying是很地道的“快死了”的说法前面的副词应该用while,一般进行时都用while而不是when,虽然这个是进行时代替将来时,但形式仍是进行时~
反正这是个将来时,用When(While) I’m going to die.或When/While I’m dying.
when I'm going to die..
When I am about to die..
when I am dying,,,,,,