我是初四的,我们前段时间刚学了
第二句,后面写的不对,可以改为 I think you should tell Mei to be more confident.
这一段我觉得可以稍微改动一下Then you should tell Mei to go to parties and talk with people. Because that can help Mei a lot,and she will be more confident.What do you think?
这里有一些小的细节没注意到And I think you should tell the rest of the students to believe Mei and give Mei some confidences.名词
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have more confident改为have more confidence
believe Mei 改为believe in Mei