英语作文求修改，求增加美丽词汇！高分！

2025-03-04 17:48:18

推荐回答（4个）

回答1：

This lecture tells us about multiculturalism in 【Australia】.【 The】 culture has
been the concern of people 【around——all over更高档】 the world ,【which has also 】been loved 【throughout】 the world. From this survey, we have knowledge of
its rich and timeless tradition, unique faith，【special】 language, geographical location，
living environment, eating habits, all kinds of sports and so on，【which may make us inspired, benefited a lot】.
Through the wonderful explanation of my English teacher, I had a deeper understanding
of Australian culture. From then on, I had a strong interest 【in】 its culture. I believe
I will fall in love with this culture gradually.
【As far as Australian】 culture, I have a deep admiration 【as well as 】a keen interest.
And, I am most interested in 【its】eating habits.
Firstly, they mainly eat pasta, and they have great preference to【it】. Secondly, as for
the cooking method ，【 frying is the craft that they do best】 .
【There are unlimited things that we can learn from in this aspect】.【 Besides——What's more更高档】,they focus on 【the quality of food】, paying attention to
the color of the plates,【which 】is very different from China. Last but not least,
【 drinks, beer, wine and coffee are the essential products 【and their friends in their
lives 】.They【 feel like drinking 短语比词汇更高档】 wine or beer at dinner frequently.

祝你开心如意！

回答2：

From this survey, we have acknowledged....这个需要改动一下.
Let us inspire > enlightening and benefiting us a lot.
deeper > profound understanding
concerning > in the content of Australia culture,I find some intense emotional connections between Australia and I, especially in eating habits. It is not only because of the preference of pasta, but also the spectacular cooking skills they have. Besides,the food safety and colorful plates are also desirable. Last but not least, coffee and alcoholic drinks are more like their daily necessities.

不知道你这是为什么类型的考试做准备,雅思还是托付或者别的之类的.
每一个要求不一样的,但是大体相同,你这篇文章整体思路不错,但是不要用太多的动词和简单句,试着尝试复杂句,都是拿分点,不要用汉语去翻译英语这样写作文,写不好的, 多写几篇,多背几个重点核心词汇,写作文就得心应手了.

回答3：

问英语老师吧~这太难了，只能说你技术太高作文太好

回答4：

这也太难了

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