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My opinion on travel industry
As we can see, the travel industry is becoming a attrative industry 。Every nation in the world all give their assistance to this industry to the most.
It is a good choice to develop it.Because we can benefit from it.For example,the visitors will buy a lot of local goods and other things.It have a positive influence in the local people.
On the other hand,it may bring some problems.As visitors setting foot in the local land,they may have some misunderstanding with people here.There is no doubt that it is bad to harmony society establishing.
回答人的补充 2010-06-18 23:57 It is a good choice to develop travel industry.Because we can benefit from it.For example,the visitors will buy a lot of local goods and may have some interests in their culture.So not only it can contribute to economy development ,but also can help people have a better understanding of their culture.
On the other hand,it may bring some problems.As visitors setting foot in the local land,they may have some misunderstanding with people here.Also,the local environment may be polluted by the rubbish that tourists throw.

In my opinion,I think we can get some chances in this industry.May be we can be a part-time tour guide and earn some money.It is pertty good！

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