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Music, from the ancient days to our nowadays,seems that it has already become involved in our lives- an inseparable component of our lives. What we need is not only a piece of music, but also a means to taste our lives. It maybe a little abstract. Let's take my friend as an instance to show you the meaning of this kind of music. Sandy really has a good taste for beautiful music. One day, when I asked him what is a beautifu music? To my surprise, he just smiled and then told me it was really an easy question that everyone knows. However the key point is if you can put your heart into it. The first one he showed me is the clear rhythm. Of course, it is vital to music. When you are alone, close your eyes and make yourself feel that you are sailing on the ocean facing the setting sun. The breeze is touching your face, looking in the sky that has been redden by the sunshine. The feeling of fresh is what the clear rhythm can bring us. Moreover, message is also crucial. Music is alive. It's not only a thing. It exists in our life. Every piece of music contains the affection of the composer. The message is the soul of the music. It's the feeling that the composer want to tell us. When we listen to the music, we should try to acknowledge this feeling. That is the reason music exist for such a long time and seems that will not distinct until human disappear. Everyone knows that Beethoven became blind in his old years, nevertheless, he never gave up his career. In his autobiography, he metioned that only one spirit support me till today is the love to music and I really want to put my love into evey piece of my music. If people can read my love, I think my life is worthy exist once. The last aspect will be the beautiful lyrics. lyrics are the flowing poems in the sky accompanied by the wind like rtythm. Like the paint, like the peaceful pstorale.
In a word, what is the true beautiful music? The answer is there is no standard. From my perspective, put your heart into it, to feel it, to taste it, to acknowlege the composer's affection, you will find every piece is more beautiful than you can imagine.
本人不才，只能先写成这样了，如果你有什么想法提出来，我会修改。 我写的较多，方便你的删改。希望可以帮到你。

Music can be considered as a form of language, and we are able to communicate with other people through music, because different musics always have different massages.I have a sister whose name is Sandy. sheis a little gril who has a special talent about music; she often has a good taste for beautuful music. She can always tell the massages behind the music no matter what kind of music. Cheerful music can bring you a good mood .When you are sad when you can listen to some cheerful tunes.music with a clear rhythm give you a clear thinking.good music always contain beautiful lyrics,through beautiful lyrics ,you can learn not only the intersting tales,but aslo the moving words .
so music is our friends, music is our psychologist.
你看下吧，我倒是不知道要用第几人称写，你如果不行的话，可以自行稍微修改下，

Sandy has a good taste for beautiful music I have a friend named Sandy ,who has a good taste for beautiful music .Do you know why ?It's really true that he told me the answer.I can summarize the reasons as following,firstly, music has a clear rhythm
。Secondly,music can send a message,for example,the feeling of love.You can express your love through music ,if you love someone but have no courage to speak it.The last but not the least,music has beautiful lyrics,which can keep all moved.Therefore Sandy love beautiful music