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My future
Everyone has his/her own dream job. If you ask me, my answer is to be a tour guide. Maybe you will ask me why? First, if I am a tour guide, I can travel not only around the China, but also around the world. Second, I have chance to introduce the beautifull scenery to people. You know my country have a long history and abundance of resorts. Third, if I am a tour guide, I can make a lot of new friends and can learn a lot from them. A wonderful job, do you agree?

我的未来
每个人都有自己的理想工作，如果你问我，我的答案是做一名导游，也许你会问为什么？ 第一，如果我是导游，我不但可畅游中国，而且可以周游世界。第二，我可以向人们介绍美丽的风景，要知道我们的国家可是历史悠久和众多的名胜。第三，如果我是导游，我可以交很多的朋友并可以从他们那里学到很多东西。极棒的工作，你同意吗？

The new China's establishment, is the innumerable martyrs trades with the blood and the life! Although is weak in the early years of the new nation China's economic basis, but the new China's leaders caused the Chinese people to stand thoroughly, caused China to realize thoroughly has been independent, is complete. in the past's 60 age middle of the month, China one was rising step by step, this was the China children expected, was also worth dancing with joy. From the founding of the nation the first day, the many unfriendly countries internationally is being hostile toward China, does everything possible to hinder China to progress. the US was the biggest threat which China developed, the Korean War which, the Vietnam War the US started causes our country has suffered the heavy loss in the manpower and the financial resource aspect; The US supports Chiang Kai-Shek counter-attacks the mainland motion to cause our country coast not to be peaceful for a long time; Present's US still in did everything possible to suppress China, like did not acknowledge that China market economy status, gesticulates, force Renminbi revaluation in the Taiwan problem and so on, zai weilai di regan nian zhong, the US will still be China's enemies, is the forever trouble makere believed that in the Chinese nation great rejuvenation's journey, will certainly to appear for one another magnificent 30 years! Chinese nation's rising, will certainly to let the world be proud for us!

My ruture
I have many dreams about my future.
One of my dream is to be a tour guide. I like travelling very much.If I could be a tour guide in future,I think I can travel many interesting and beautiful places.And as a tour guide, I can introduce the cenery to the visitors.
对于未来，我有许多梦想。当导游是我的梦想之一。我非常喜欢旅游。如果在未来，我可以成为一个导游，我想我可以去许多有趣且美丽的地方旅游，并且，作为一个导游，我也可以向游客们介绍这些景色。