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511 BC in Qufu in Shandong Province today, the birth of the famous ancient Chinese thinker and educator Confucius.His family was very poor but he seriously from an early age to study, study hard. More than 20 years of age, he became a minor official. He was learned, work conscientiously, work well, when 30-year-old he had a very well-known. Confucius went to meet many national leaders, like the effectiveness of national rulers, but they did not accept his political views. Therefore, Confucius was determined to contribute his full attention to school. Many people known this news, senting their children to worship and treated Confucius as a good teacher. Confucius accepted these students, to create the history of China's education cause of private lectures.

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不敢当：511 BC in Qufu in Shandong Province today, the birth of the famous ancient Chinese thinker and educator Confucius.His family was very poor but he seriously from an early age to study, study hard. More than 20 years of age, he became a minor official. He was learned, work conscientiously, work well, when 30-year-old he had a very well-known. Confucius went to meet many national leaders, like the effectiveness of national rulers, but they did not accept his political views. Therefore, Confucius was determined to contribute his full attention to school. Many people known this news, senting their children to worship and treated Confucius as a good teacher. Confucius accepted these students, to create the history of China's education cause of private lectures.
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511 B.C. were born in today's Shandong Province Qufu China ancient times the renowned thinker, educationalist Kong Zi. In Kong Zi's family is very poor, but he earnestly studies since childhood, assiduous study. over 20 year-old time, has made a waiter. He has the knowledge very much, the management is earnest, the work is splendid, about 30 years old already already was very famous. Kong Zi has been to many feudal lord countries, wants for various countries' king potency, but they do not accept his political opinion. Therefore, Kong Zi was determined that uses own complete energy to run a school. Many people knew after this news, sends own child does obeisance Kong Zi is the teacher. Kong Zi has accepted these students, founded in the Chinese history of education personal lecture enterprise.

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